20. Notes on 24/7
As well as the feedback we have already recieved for our entire project including the blog and my 24/7 images, there was also some notes around the images, which I have decided to show on here, this would be useful if I was to retry my 24/7 project or change any of the photographs in anyway. Any feedback or notes are useful to get the best possible marks! - Once again, I have used the purple text as any notes I wanted to make on my images, and the red for the notes my lecturer has made. So there are a few photographs which I could potentially change to get the extra marks, and as my lecturer stated, it would be nice if there were more photographs of my grandmother interacting with others, which I did not have many of. Also, I could include other family member, including my Grandfather, just to show that she isn't on her own. It might be worth going to take another shoot with my grandmother!